9.4 Stamping Our New Foot on Line 3

So far, we have this. Reality lies where? Above or beneath? And what do we see here? Surrounded by lies? And our next line is: “We either must reduce ourselves to the particles that compose us.” How shall we make it fit? How about “Should we reduce ourselves to particles?” Let’s write it out to Read more about 9.4 Stamping Our New Foot on Line 3[…]

8.6 Stamping Our Foot on Line 4

So, on to line 4. 1  2 3    4  5 6   7 8     9   10  11    12 13 ,  .  ,   .  , .   , .     ,   .   ,     .  . Or submit to being nothing but the parts of some 1415 16 , .  , supergroup As the line stands, we cannot treat “Or” as a pickup, because it has to be stressed. And it has to be stressed because “su-,” in “submit,” has to be unstressed. If we could find another word that started with a stressed syllable, however, Read more about 8.6 Stamping Our Foot on Line 4[…]

8.4 A Mistake, Quickly Fixed

What, therefore, if we rethought the beginning, changing “what we see here” to “everything we see here”? Let’s try it.     1  2 3     4  5   6    7  8   9 10    11  12 .   ,  . ,     .  ,   .    ,  .   , .     ,   .    And everything we see here at our level’s nothing 13  141516 ,   . , . but illusion So, lines 1 and 2 are now: I sometimes worry that reality’s above us or below us And everything we see here at our level’s nothing but illusion But Read more about 8.4 A Mistake, Quickly Fixed[…]

8.1 Rythmic Sculpting Continues

We are working with the following set of lyrics. I sometimes worry that reality lies above us or below us And what we see at our level is an illusion We either must reduce ourselves to the particles that compose us Or submit to being nothing but the parts of some supergroup Last chapter, we Read more about 8.1 Rythmic Sculpting Continues[…]